From 0069818cf919cc40d6b9a506f8e66d92a0561c2f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ian Ramzy <ianramzy@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 4 Apr 2020 19:42:21 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Update wording + soft move away from room

---
 public/landing.html | 31 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 public/newroom.html |  8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/public/landing.html b/public/landing.html
index c23571e..84e791c 100755
--- a/public/landing.html
+++ b/public/landing.html
@@ -71,13 +71,13 @@
                       class="mt-0 mb-16 reveal-from-bottom"
                       data-reveal-delay="150"
                     >
-                      Zipcall.<br />The most advanced video chat ever created.
+                      Zipcall.io<br />The most advanced video chat ever created.
                     </h1>
                     <p
                       class="mt-0 mb-32 reveal-from-bottom"
                       data-reveal-delay="300"
                     >
-                      Decentralized video calling provides quality and latency
+                      Peer to peer video calling provides quality and latency
                       simply not available with traditional technology.
                     </p>
                     <div class="reveal-from-bottom" data-reveal-delay="450">
@@ -120,10 +120,10 @@
                 >
                   <h2 class="mt-0 mb-16">See the whole picture</h2>
                   <p class="m-0">
-                    Zipcall is built radically different. We ditched slow bulky
-                    servers, opting for decentralized peer to peer calling.
-                    Maximum video quality and lowest latency. Its good, trust
-                    us.
+                    Zipcall is built radically different. We left behind slow
+                    bulky servers, opting for decentralized peer to peer
+                    calling. We engineered a platform with maximum video quality
+                    and low latency. Its good, trust us.
                   </p>
                 </div>
               </div>
@@ -166,8 +166,7 @@
                       <h4 class="mt-0 mb-8">Best Video Quality</h4>
                       <p class="m-0 text-sm">
                         State of the art VP9 video compression combined with our
-                        custom scaling optimization means your calls have never
-                        looked better.
+                        scaling optimization makes yours calls crystal clear.
                       </p>
                     </div>
                   </div>
@@ -187,8 +186,8 @@
                     <div class="features-tiles-item-content">
                       <h4 class="mt-0 mb-8">Total Privacy</h4>
                       <p class="m-0 text-sm">
-                        Each chat room is single use, with data kept between you
-                        and your friend. Your data is yours to keep.
+                        Each chat is single use, data stays between you and your
+                        caller. Zipcall is built privacy first.
                       </p>
                     </div>
                   </div>
@@ -208,8 +207,8 @@
                     <div class="features-tiles-item-content">
                       <h4 class="mt-0 mb-8">No Download Required</h4>
                       <p class="m-0 text-sm">
-                        No download means you can get back to what matters most.
-                        Just open Zipcalls in Chrome or Firefox.
+                        No downloads. No plugins. No nonsense. Just open Zipcall
+                        in your browser and get back to what matters most.
                       </p>
                     </div>
                   </div>
@@ -230,8 +229,8 @@
                     <div class="features-tiles-item-content">
                       <h4 class="mt-0 mb-8">No Server Needed</h4>
                       <p class="m-0 text-sm">
-                        Calls are entirely between you and your friend.
-                        Decentralized from any server. Data never leaves the
+                        Calls are entirely between you and your caller,
+                        decentralized from any server. Data never leaves the
                         browser. Cool right?
                       </p>
                     </div>
@@ -316,7 +315,9 @@
             <div class="section-inner has-top-divider">
               <div class="container-xs">
                 <div class="section-header center-content">
-                  <h2 class="m-0">Tired of the old way of chatting?</h2>
+                  <h2 class="m-0">
+                    Try an easier and more secure way of calling.
+                  </h2>
                 </div>
                 <div class="center-content">
                   <a
diff --git a/public/newroom.html b/public/newroom.html
index ffe4257..ae459dd 100755
--- a/public/newroom.html
+++ b/public/newroom.html
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
                       class="mt-0 mb-16 reveal-from-bottom"
                       data-reveal-delay="150"
                     >
-                      Get room. <br />
+                      Pick name. <br />
                       Share URL. <br />
                       Start chatting.
                     </h1>
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
                       class="mt-0 mb-32 reveal-from-bottom"
                       data-reveal-delay="300"
                     >
-                      Each chat has its own disposable URL. Just get a room and
+                      Each chat has its own disposable URL. Just pick a call name and
                       share your custom link. It's really that easy.
                     </p>
                   </div>
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
             <div class="cta-inner section-inner cta-split">
               <div class="cta-slogan">
                 <h3 class="m-0">
-                  Pick a room name.<br />
+                  Pick a call name.<br />
                   How about this one?
                 </h3>
               </div>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
                       class="button button-primary pulse"
                       onclick="{window.location.href = '/room/' + document.getElementById('input-01').value}"
                     >
-                      Go To My Room
+                      Go To My Call
                     </button>
                   </div>
                 </div>